Guidance
Trope 15 · copy

"It's not X, it's Y" copy

Severity 1 of 3 · detected by content

Why it reads as slop

Negating a thing nobody claimed is rhetorical filler. Say what the thing is.

Heuristic

Sentences of the form 'it's not A, it's B' or 'this isn't A. It's B.'

Antidotes

  • Direct, specific claims with a number or an examplepractice